My own RWS story thread take 2

[Allosaurus]

The original version wasn't supposed to be closed. It was supposed to be open. That's why I'm reopening it.

Well, the first book is called "Sophie the Ffarquar 0-8-0 tender engine," and it's about an LNWR 0-8-0 G Class tender engine named Sophie coming to Ffarquar to help out while Daisy, Mavis, and Henrietta are being overhauled. (Henrietta got a hot axle-box, but her brakes were also being faulty; they kept slipping on even without the guard.)

But you'll have to read the story to see everything that happens during the book. Well, please tell me your thoughts on this.

[Allosaurus]

Well, here's the list of characters going to appear in story 1:

Character List

• Thomas
  
• Henry
  
• Gordon
  
• James
  
• Percy
  
• Toby
  
• Donald
  
• Boco
  
• Edward (Does not speak)
  
• Annie and Clarabel (Do not speak)
  
• Duck(Cameo)
  
• Douglas(Cameo)
  
• Oliver (Cameo)
  
• Bear (Cameo)
  
• Daisy (Mentioned)
  
• Mavis (Mentioned)
  
• Henrietta (Mentioned)
  
• Victoria (Mentioned)
  
• Elsie (Mentioned. First time too.)
  

Well, please tell me your thoughts

[John]

I'll reopen that thread, but this one shall be closed for double-posting and being impatient.

THREAD CLOSED FOR GOOD